MY RESPONSES AND FEEDBACK
PEERS AND TEACHERS
After doing my pitch to my class and teachers, I was given some quick and simple feedback based on my ideas and how I can improve in order to fulfil the brief best. For example, I need to focus on finding concrete examples of intertextuality that I can add to my pitch and my magazine. Lots of my peers enjoyed the idea of Pilates and the 'clean girl' trend - this information I can use as market research and ensure that I can appeal to my audience and provide content that they will enjoy.
